Postcard drafts
Heya! I’ve attached two drafts for the front of my postcard (as well to use as a poster). I’d love thoughts. I feel like the draft 2 is a bit too busy, but I do want to find a way to include one of my (awesome) press quotes. Please let me know what you think!
Uncovering the Mirrors, draft 1
Uncovering the Mirrors, draft 2
Themocracy
I don’t think the second one is too busy (and that’s a great quote!). To me, the first one looks a little unbalanced, even. That’s my personal opinion, of course.
I might go for the second one just because the dates are a little bigger (more in your face) and easier to read, though for the poster it won’t make much difference.
Thanks for the feedback! I have a third draft that I need to post, which I think helps a bit.
Where is this hand with the grocery bag coming from? Is this your hand somehow strangely twisted around your body? Sadly, I am unable to get over the strangeness of the hands.
I do like having the quote though.
Your face is strangely twisted! (I’m allowed to make fun of M because we know each other from high school…)
More seriously, the hand on my knee is my left hand, holding my legs. The hand holding the bag is my right hand, just resting on the stairs. No twisting, just a lot of fabric.
The second one!